She has a great face. I love her strong features and twinkly eyes. My only real critique on this image is it needs more contrast. Stronger darks are needed. Right now she appears to have a blue fog/mist coloring her face. Play with the color variations in photoshop. Maybe upping the yellow a bit will warm the flesh tones.

Sorry the critique is so short. The rules insist on 100 words or more. But to be honest, this is a sweet and personal photo/portrait and doesn't need that much punch it up a bit.

There is an old rule attributed to Arther Rackham, "if it don't work in Black & White, it won't work in color!"